Don’t be sorry! Writing about fighting when you have no practical experience is a difficult challenge and writing fight sequences when you do is still time consuming. There are a lot pieces working together and figuring out how they function is difficult and something very few writers actually do well.
Here are a list some of our posts that may be helpful to you:
Five Simple Ways to Write Convincing Fight Sequences
Fight Write: A Basic Upper Body Primer (Open Hand)
Fight Write: A Basic Upper Body Primer (Fists)
Fight Write: The Art of Stepping
Fight Write: The Art of Blocking
Tip: Fights Start for a Reason
ObsidianMichi’s Real World Fight Facts
Fight Write: The Only Unfair Fight is the One You Lose Part 1
The Only Unfair Fight is the One You Lose Part 2 (Brutality)
Unusual Martial Art: Street Fighting
Fight Write: Art, Sport, Subdual, and Lethality
Also check anything in our Michael Janich tag, he is a very good instructor who teaches self-defense. I refer people to his videos for the work he does with concepts, where he actively explains what a technique is, what it does, and why it’s used before teaching the technique. As a writer, you need both technique and concept before you can put it on the page.
I plan on doing a write up on both elbows and knees in the near future. There’s a lot of misconceptions about how these techniques work.
Also check out Tamora Pierce’s Tortall series particularly First Test and Page in The Protector of the Small quartet. Tamora Pierce is one of the few authors that write fight scenes I feel comfortable recommending for reference.
Good hunting!
-Michi
Tag: reference

Dunno if anyone’s interested in these, but this was my latest assignment for CGMA’s Art of Color and Light class- this past week focused on how light interacts with different materials.
It’d be cool to try some different skin tones, I just used my own pasty hand for reference. Maybe even an alien species with non-red blood, so the occlusion shadow glows a different color where light passes through? Would it be purple for Namekians and green for Vulcans? (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ possibilities
Also, the iridescent pearl wasn’t a requirement, but I enjoy Sailor Moon and suffering. If anyone’s got pointers on iridescence, I am all ears over here, because I clawed my way through that one screaming

How a ship’s gun works.
The sailor standing there is crucial to the process.
Top priority: have at least one sailor standing guard of the void pit
For those curious, the green part is the part that gets shot out, the yellow stuff is the propellant that’s ignited to set off the explosion.
Hello! I’m trying to draw tech-priests, but I’m having some trouble, do you have any references?
Okay, so yes! I have lots of stuff to say about this and I’ll basically just show you what I do.
The answer to that is somewhere between yes and no. It depends on what exactly you want.
There is a lot of Adeptus Mechanicus artwork out there and I have a lot of tech-priests on my blog, all tagged and easy to find. You can search Tumblr, flick through the rule books for Dark Heresy, Rogue Trader or the Lathe Worlds for examples.
One thing about a lot of official art I notice however, is often it seems to be creating something really cool – but not something that could necessarily work in real life. This is more of a technical issue; you will notice often a lot of artists have trouble drawing tech-priest robes. The robes are painted on and don’t actually make much sense. How does the tech-priest get them on or off? How do the clothes function?
This goes for augments as well. Sometimes it looks to me like the tech-priest might not actually be able to have functional use of their limbs. It’s all very well and good to have syringes coming out of your fingertips but how are you going to open doors? (Looking at you, syringe guy.)
These guys look incredibly cool – but I often sit there wondering how exactly they get about doing things like going to the bathroom or cleaning themselves.
One hand wave is to say that’s what they have servo skulls for but eh. It is also possible they don’t actually move around much – so you could argue that a basis around your design could be what the tech-priest’s job actually is. It’s really up to you.
I have a few headcanons on the topic but anyway.
I generally find that the easiest way to work out how to draw tech-priests was to have some idea of how their augments were fitted to their body. Since of course there’s basically next to no artwork out there that shows tech-priest exclusive augments it’s pretty hard to get an idea how that works so it feels to me to be mostly guess work.
I will start by showing you how I think cybermantles and potentia coils fit to the body and to the mechadendrites that are perched there.
So it might also come out looking like this…
Or like so…
Mechadendrites can also be either segmented…
Or you have the flexible variety…
It seems the nature of the designs of their mechadendrite tools are also quite unique and highly varied, so don’t feel constrained to one design – just go nuts and have fun with it.
Basically it’s a huge galaxy and a very varied level quality of tech out there, so you can have a steampunk tech-priest if you want or one that looks like a medieval knight, if they’ve come from a feudal world.
One way to narrow down the choices and to work out what to draw, ask yourself these things:
1. Where does this tech-priest come from? Do they have a lot of money? Do they have a lot of access to resources like raw materials, high tech facilities, modern and high quality medical support? What kind of tech do they have available to them?
2. What does the tech-priest do for a job? Do they need to move around a lot? Do they have to have mobility? Will they be going outside in harsh weather a lot?
3. How senior are they? Basically, the older they are and the higher in rank they become, the more augments they have. Maybe you can use this to reflect changes in the quality and style of their augments if they’ve moved around from planet to planet a lot during their lives.
Stuff to consider.
Hope that helps.
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That font…Oh my…

it’s this one. i learned it for the joke XD
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